Nathan Rhys Arturo - Revision history

WOA-024 at 06:28, 21 January 2019

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WOA-024 at 06:21, 21 January 2019

2019-01-21T06:21:49Z

BDH-015 at 19:36, 16 May 2018

2018-05-16T19:36:04Z

WOA-004: /* Character Inspirations */

2016-04-17T21:18:12Z

‎Character Inspirations

WOA-004: /* Character Inspirations */

2016-04-17T21:16:13Z

‎Character Inspirations

WOA-004: /* Rumors */

2016-04-17T15:14:08Z

‎Rumors

STH-006 at 01:17, 13 April 2016

2016-04-13T01:17:26Z

STH-006 at 01:16, 13 April 2016

2016-04-13T01:16:15Z

WOA-024: /* Known History */

2016-04-06T02:46:51Z

‎Known History

WOA-024: /* Known History */

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‎Known History

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 [[Isadora Sjekna]] <br>
 [[Ivan Sjekna]] <br>
-[[Rochelle]]
+[[Rochelle]] <br>
 ==Enemies==

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 '''Concept: Avenging Sophophile '''
-'''Physical description: Nathan stands 6"3 with a strong build. His hair is brown and normally in neat condition. He tends to dress casually, but will dress according to the situation. His eyes are normally blue, however they glow red whenever he becomes distressed or angry. '''
+'''Physical description: Nathan stands 6"3 with a strong build. His hair is brown and normally in neat condition or under a cowboy hat. He tends to dress casually, but will dress according to the situation. His eyes are normally blue, however they glow red whenever he becomes distressed or angry. '''
-'''Detailed Status: <br>Acknowledged by Prince Banderson of Kansas City<br>Brave by Former Sovereign Prince Faulkner of Macon, Ga '''<br>
+'''Detailed Status: <br>Acknowledged by Prince Banderson of Kansas City<br>Brave by Former Sovereign Prince Faulkner of Macon, Ga<br>Insightful by Former Seneschal Vaan Sliel '''<br>
 <h2>Character Information</h2>
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 Embraced by the Elder Drake, Nathan was chosen to be Kindred for his desire to fight for his ideals. With his preferred weapon of knowledge, he survives each night seeking new knowledge and perspectives. Nathan has traveled all over the United States with his partner, Rochelle, meeting different Kindred and discussing many academic topics.
-Before the rebellion took Mobile, he managed the Ivory Education Fund. The Fund made it possible for young neonates with little resources and ability to attend a college institution. Nathan not only managed it, but utilized it to obtain a second college education.
+Before the Sabbat took Mobile, he managed the Ivory Education Fund. The Fund made it possible for young neonates with little resources and ability to attend a college institution. Nathan not only managed it, but utilized it to obtain a second college education.
 Nathan has held a few positions in Griffin, such as Lesser Harpy under Mnsr. Ezekiel Cross of Venture, and as Primogen of Brujah. During both times, he strove for the betterment of the domain and assisted many in important tasks.
-Some point during the 80s, Nathan lost Rochelle to the Sabbat. To this night, Nathan hunts those responsible for killing her. He seeks new knowledge and power along his way to better equip himself against those he hunts.
+Some point during the 80s, Nathan lost Rochelle to the Sabbat. Nathan hunted those responsible for killing her. He saught new knowledge and power along his way to better equip himself against those he hunted.
-In recent nights, he has allied himself with the Sjekna Brood, led by [[Ivan Sjekna]]. Through trial and ritual, he has been accepted into their "family". This has led to tensions between the Brujah of Georgia and the Sjekna, for they speak differently but mean the same thing. Disagreements aside, Nathan chooses to walk the line of loyalty between these two groups knowing well the difficulties. It is his hope to be a bridge between the two different cultures, for in his mind they all walk different paths but their destinations are relatively the same.
+A few years ago, he has allied himself with the Sjekna Brood, led by [[Ivan Sjekna]]. Through trial and ritual, he was accepted into their "family". This led to tensions between the Brujah of Georgia and the Sjekna, for they spoke differently but meant the same thing. Disagreements aside, Nathan chose to walk the line of loyalty between these two groups knowing well the difficulties. It was his hope to be a bridge between the two different cultures, for in his mind they walked different paths but their destinations were relatively the same. However, in the end, the two groups parted ways and Nathan became distant with the Sjeckna.
 On April 2nd, 2016, Nathan and Mercy, ghoul of the Sjekna, were attacked en route to gather by numerous men with shotguns. Mercy perished in the attack with a note in her vest. This note challenged Nathan to meet with someone alone. This brought information leading to the whereabouts of his long lost partner, Rochelle. Presumed dead, Rochelle had been tortured for 31 years by the Sabbat he was hunting. Now freed, Rochelle and Nathan wander the nights seeking their revenge on any Sabbat they see, hoping to find the ones responsible.
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 ==Enemies==
-Grady of Brujah
+Grady of Brujah, Sabbat
 ==Sire==
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 ==Broodmates==
-Rochelle, potentially
+Rochelle
 ==Character Inspirations==
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 *Nathan helped an elder Gangrel slaughter a pack of Garou, just for fun.
 *Nathan went on a Spirit Quest into the High Umbra and fought a pirate in Tortuga.
 *Nathan beat down a Sabbat pack with a book. The book was "The Essential Gandhi".
 *Nathan is secretly a Gangrel.
-** His friendship with the Sjekna has raised many eyebrows...and not a few fists amongst the Brujah of Georgia.
+** His friendship with the Sjekna raised many eyebrows...and not a few fists amongst the Brujah of Georgia.

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 ==Character Inspirations==
-Owen from Disney's "Gargoyles"
+[http://gargoyles.wikia.com/wiki/Owen_Burnett Owen Burnett] from Disney's "Gargoyles"
 [http://buffy.wikia.com/wiki/Wesley_Wyndam-Pryce Wesley Wyndam-Pryce] from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer"
-Quin Mallory from "Sliders" TV Show
+[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quinn_Mallory Quinn Mallory] from "Sliders" TV Show
 ==Soundtrack==

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 Owen from Disney's "Gargoyles"
-Wesley Winston Price from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer"
+[http://buffy.wikia.com/wiki/Wesley_Wyndam-Pryce Wesley Wyndam-Pryce] from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer"
 Quin Mallory from "Sliders" TV Show

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 =Overview=
-[[Image:Nathan.jpg|thumb|Nathan visting Nashville]][[File:Boss.jpg|thumb]]
+[[Image:Nathan.jpg|thumb|Nathan visiting Nashville]][[File:Boss.jpg|thumb|A moments rest]]
 '''Real Name: Nathan Rhys Arturo '''

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 ==Known History==
-Embraced by the Elder Drake, Nathan was chosen to be Kindred for his desire to fight for his ideals. With his preferred weapon of knowledge, he survives each night seeking knew knowledge and perspectives. Nathan has traveled all over the United States with his partner, Rochelle, meeting different Kindred and discussing many academic topics.
+Embraced by the Elder Drake, Nathan was chosen to be Kindred for his desire to fight for his ideals. With his preferred weapon of knowledge, he survives each night seeking new knowledge and perspectives. Nathan has traveled all over the United States with his partner, Rochelle, meeting different Kindred and discussing many academic topics.
 Before the rebellion took Mobile, he managed the Ivory Education Fund. The Fund made it possible for young neonates with little resources and ability to attend a college institution. Nathan not only managed it, but utilized it to obtain a second college education.
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 Some point during the 80s, Nathan lost Rochelle to the Sabbat. To this night, Nathan hunts those responsible for killing her. He has seeks new knowledge and power along his way to better equip himself against those he hunts.
-In recent nights, he has allied himself with the Sjekna Brood, led by [[Ivan Sjekna]]. Through trial and ritual, he has been accepted into their "family". This has led to tensions between the Brujah of Georgia and the Sjekna, for they speak differently but mean the same thing. Disagreements aside, Nathan chooses to walk the line of loyalty between these two groups knowing well the difficulties. It is his hope to be a bridge between the two different cultures, for in his mind they are walk different paths but their destinations are relatively the same.
+In recent nights, he has allied himself with the Sjekna Brood, led by [[Ivan Sjekna]]. Through trial and ritual, he has been accepted into their "family". This has led to tensions between the Brujah of Georgia and the Sjekna, for they speak differently but mean the same thing. Disagreements aside, Nathan chooses to walk the line of loyalty between these two groups knowing well the difficulties. It is his hope to be a bridge between the two different cultures, for in his mind they all walk different paths but their destinations are relatively the same.
 On April 2nd, 2016, Nathan and Mercy, ghoul of the Sjekna, were attacked en route to gather by numerous men with shotguns. Mercy perished in the attack with a note in her vest. This note challenged Nathan to meet with someone alone. This brought information leading to the whereabouts of his long lost partner, Rochelle. Presumed dead, Rochelle had been tortured for 31 years by the Sabbat he was hunting. Now freed, Rochelle and Nathan wander the nights seeking their revenge on any Sabbat they see, hoping to find the ones responsible.
 ==Coterie==