Alan - Revision history

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‎Soundtrack

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‎Known History

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‎Known History

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‎Rumors

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‎Overview

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 *Kings and Queens - 30 Seconds To Mars<br>
 *Money Owns This Town - Alabama 3<br>
 ==Quotes==

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 *Was suspected of being under Infernal Influence in Sorocaba, Brazil, in 2011.<br>
 *Moved to the Domain of Parahyba, Brazil, and became Keeper of Elysium in 2012.<br>
-*Lost the position of Keeper of Elysium still in 2012.<br>
+*Lost the position of Keeper of Elysium and was severly punished by the Prince still in 2012.<br>
 ==Coterie==

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 *Was suspected of being under Infernal Influence in Sorocaba, Brazil, in 2011.<br>
 *Moved to the Domain of Parahyba, Brazil, and became Keeper of Elysium in 2012.<br>
 ==Coterie==

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 *Acknowledged by [[Ricardo Sólo]]n, First Prince of Fortaleza, Brazil;<br>
 *Influential by [[Fryderyk Kazimierz Chwalibog]], Ventrue Elder, for holding meetings and contacts with Kindred all over Brazil in favor of the Camarilla;<br>
 *Esteemed by [[Peregrino de Carvalho]], former Prince of Parahyba, Brazil, for holding the Masquerade together during an open War against the Rebellion;<br>
-*Glorified by [[Don Uriel de Évora]], Prince of Natal, Brazil, for his help in slaying Northeastern Brazil Camarilla's biggest hystorical enemy, Alejandro Herrera;
+*Glorified by [[Don Uriel de Évora]], Prince of Natal, Brazil, for his help in slaying Northeastern Brazil Camarilla's biggest hystorical enemy, Alejandro Herrera.<br>
 <h2>Character Information</h2>

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 * Became the Keeper of Elysium of the Domain of Parahyba as part of a plan for a soon-to-be Praxis Seizure;
 * Although defers to Primogen Catarina de Albuquerque in public, is in fact her superior inside the Ventrue Clan;
-* Is responsible for the biggest Masquerade Breach of the Parahyba Domain in recent Nights, despite holding the Position of Keeper of Elysium;
+* Is responsible for the biggest Masquerade Breach of the Parahyba Domain in recent Nights, despite holding the Position of Keeper of Elysium of said Domain;
 * Ruined the Northeastern Brazil Grand Elysium of 2012 and incurred the wrath of many proeminent Toreador, amongst which [[Maria Eduarda de Alcântara Vieira]]'s;
 * Has impressed Kindred worldwide with his diplomacy, wit, and knowledge;

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 * Was investigated by Lady Lucinde's Archons for having secretly confabulated with Cret during his recent appearence in Northeastern Brazil;
 * Was accused by his long-time acquaintance Archon Luigi Falcone of being an Infernalist during one of the meetings with the Brazilian Rebellion and has resurfaced only recently;
-* Became the Keeper of Elysium of the Domain of Parahyba as part of a plan for a soon-to-be Praxis Seizure; <br>
+* Became the Keeper of Elysium of the Domain of Parahyba as part of a plan for a soon-to-be Praxis Seizure;
 * Although defers to Primogen Catarina de Albuquerque in public, is in fact her superior inside the Ventrue Clan;
 * Has impressed Kindred worldwide with his diplomacy, wit, and knowledge;
 * The Harpies still miss him amongst their ranks.

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 '''Concept:''' Diplomat
-'''Physical description:''' Despite being very handsome and tall, of short black hair, brown-green eyes, pale skin and apparently in the middle twenties, what really draws one's attention is the charisma Alan has, almost like an aura centered around his ever-present smile and jovial expression. Also, when setting eyes upon Alan, one has the certainty of having met him before and feels a level of confidence for him. Plus, his voice is deep and melodious, as if a hymn sang through it.
+'''Physical description:''' Despite being very handsome and tall, of short black hair, alluring brown-green eyes, pale skin and apparently in the middle twenties, what really draws one's attention is the charisma Alan has, almost like an aura centered around his ever-present smile and jovial expression. Also, when setting eyes upon Alan, one has the certainty of having met him before and feels a level of confidence for him. Plus, his voice is deep and melodious, as if a hymn sang through it.
 '''Relevant Merits:''' Enchanting Voice, Friendly Face and Powerful Gaze.<br>